13.4.06

The Last Letter

Z is compatible
for the morning revelation
as dawn bleeds over the palest star:
zephyr, zoraster, zero, zen.
Those in vaults
like diamonds where
the eldest prisoners tortured
are chaste, rehabilitated and ready.
Privy to the static
age old whisper: dia-gnosis.

Aftermath to etc., aftermath to was,
aftermath shall be the vague carress
of temptation a fancy term:
Mighty apocrypha tear down these walls.


Where are your villages, your birds?How many brothers walk?Fruit on the branch is willing.A door for entry, one for knocking.Cattle at the butchery, their eyes.Heavy melon carts, spring.Collars creased to the napes of necks.Twisting called spine.Blistery disk melts the sea's a cold blanket covering the earth.Clouds organize into shadows.Wind and too many crops.Disasters happen once, myths twice.Waves toss the work of towns into trees.Night vision turns sleepers into green.A general curled next to his pyre.

Memories fade, they fade.Survival is for brutes.
Z is for lightning.Birds laugh in the morning, dogs all night long.

The thunder said, remember me?

3 comments:

ozymandiaz said...

Wow, quite desulory. So many stories rendered to anonymity .

Carmenisacat said...
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Carmenisacat said...

:)

What did that thunder say anyway? That is the question. My newest guess is that it is a metaphor for a 'strike' of lighting or new knowledge and the thunder is the 'echo' of that information.

It is a start...the poem still has some very big flaws though. I didn't like it much while I was writing it because of course..yes...the Z also stands for 'utopia' and that would be the alternative meaning of "Zion"...

Zion isn't looking too utopic-like right now...I wish it was for everyone's sake but the old issues will always be there. The Jewish faith just won't accept Isa (Jesus/SAW) or Mohamed (SAW)...and then we have the Shia/Sunni conflict which stems around a similar kind of issue i.e. betrayal. Who was betrayed? Muwawiya or Ali Mu'mineen (SAW)? My newest Islamic scholar friend says he agrees that it is the Shia story that rings true...and really..it (the Nahjul) is known as the beginning of Arabic rhetoric. A fine read to be had in that old Nahjul Balagha...I truly, truly recommend it even though it is a bit hard to get into all the names...Abu this and Ibn that...it is worth it. You (or anyone else) will really understand Iraq so much better if you read that very long and hard book. It is though...an ENJOYABLE read...battles scenes are terrific :) Also it reveals some of the lesser known "prophecies". One reason non muslims have such a hard time with Islam is because they don't see the 'miracles' like the old Bible stories. They are there but you have to find them outside the Koran. The Koran itself declares that IT is the real miracle. Simple miracle...no flying elephants or machines because I suppose Allah knew that sort of thing would fail to impress a society that can clone rabbits.

:) But yes...the beginning of Z.