30.4.12

Runneth Over

Seed bearing pack of fruit,
a load of testimony read left
to right, abundant kickback
swizzle stick in an instant flick
already sick the sky comes down
and the last rider rides
between thunder and cups,
the final laugh a brave sigh.

6 comments:

Brian Miller said...

nice quick rhymes and word play...really like these lines...

already sick the sky comes down
and the last rider rides
between thunder and cups

Pranita said...

A unique take on the prompt... i esp loved the last line..!
When you drown in your crystal clear tears.

Sean Vessey said...

Drink to the full cups
Bare witness to life's madness
Suffer the liver

Tess Kincaid said...

Nice...I like the swizzle stick...

Carmenisacat said...

:)

Peace and well, I don't drink hahaha but what to say...swizzle is a great word.

Thanks for the prompt Ms. Kincaid

Carrie Van Horn said...

A cool play on words Margaret! :-)